...Staring right into Michaela’s eyes, lifeless, careless, dead...then all of a sudden the THING charged right at the glass backdoor Nicole screaming as soon as it’s dead, dirty, half-eaten body smashes into the glass leaving blood on the glass, her mum & dad finally rush downstairs confused, and a bit grumpy on how they woke them up Nicole's dad yells for her, “Nicole! Where are you? Why are you awake so early?!” Nicole replies really softly “Over here with Michaela….and there's something outside dad..” her mum and dad approach them, Michaela reminds them to stay quiet and be careful, they were confused but they did anyways Michaela and Nicole hid in the corner of the dining room scared, and can’t move. Nicole’s parents ask what's wrong, Nicole points to the glass backdoor…
Horrified, her parents grab her and Michaela takes them to Nicole’s bedroom, her dad said: “If anything happens...jump out of the window and get to a police station, tell them what you saw ok, make sure they come!” Dad closed the door and locked it. Nicole was panicking. She kept on saying “What if my parents get eaten as well..?!” Michaela kept on telling her that nothing was going to happen, but Michaela thought to herself “I can't be so sure..”. They sat in Nicole's room while listening to all the commotion that was going on downstairs with that thing and Nicole’s parents, eventually, they heard...
If you didn't read the last paragraph, it's on my blog as well.
Hello Toni,
ReplyDeleteI think the start of your story but the rest of it is hanging off the page and blends into the background so reading it was hard.But overall it was very interesting.